Second Draft Self Review

Front Cover

What went well

• Costume/style of model
• Colour scheme (Black, white, and red)
• Models place on the page
• Title of magazine and the font it
• The lighting which created the shadow falling onto the backdrop from the models right hand side - This gives it a three dimensional look

Even better if

• Experiment with different fonts for the heading and strapline
• Cut out the shadow that is made from the models left arm, as this looks accidental

Contents Page

What went well

• There is consistency with the font of the masthead on the front cover with the title 'contents' and subheadings, linking the pages together
• The 'mirror image' layout of the subheadings and description
• Colour scheme is consistent (Black, white, and red)
• Classic font used works well with the 'Lemondrop' font that is associated with the magazine 

Even better if

• Change the image at the bottom of the page
• Incorporate different models into the layout of the page

Double page spread

What went well

• The main image reflects and builds a representation of the artist's character/personality
• The faded 'L' in the background of the article creates an interesting feature
• Colour scheme is consistent (Black, white, and red)
• Font works well against the image and assists in creating a modern/simple design
• The shadow, deliberately created through the use of lighting, creates a three dimensional appearance

Even better if

• Change the size of the first paragraph of the article as it is significantly long for an opening paragraph and looks out of proportion in comparison to the following paragraphs