- Cut out the shadow made by the model's left arm
- Slightly reduce the size of the masthead
- Change the size of the barcode
- Experiment/change the font of the subheading and strap line
- Show a stronger sense of the hip-hop genre through the design
Contents page
- Change the image at the bottom of the page/possibly add a mirror effect
- Page number must be added
- Reduce the size of the text
- Move page numbers into the middle
- Reconsider layout
- Include more models
Double page spread
- Change the size of the opening paragraph
- Increase the margin on each side of the text and the top and bottom of the page
- Increase length of article
- Credit the writer and photographer
- Experiment/change font used over the main image
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